August 3, 2020
This erotic romance encompasses most of the elements of the recent “Me Too” scandals when actresses have come forward to describe events in which they have been sexually abused by powerful men in the entertainment industry. The characters in the book are well described, particularly the perpetrator and his female accomplice. The sex scenes are graphically depicted and fit well within the narrative. Some readers may be put off by the explicit content, which I found did not detract from the story itself. Although described as a romance the novel is more of a thriller and the plot kept me turning the pages right to the end.
Published by Harmony Kent Author Servicesandals,
in paperback and as an ebook
July 16, 2020
I have a particular fondness for private detective novels, particularly those set in the USA and this one proved to be no exception. The detectives involved here are clearly a close knit family. All seemed to be involved in this story to some extent, including the detective’s dog, but the chief protagonists are the private detective, Frank Rozzani and his lawyer partner, Jonesy.
The plot is a twist on the normal narrative for this type of story, in that the detectives are asked to represent a man who has been accused of abusing his girlfriend. All the characters are believable, especially the villains. Rossani and Jonesey are accomplished jazz musicians and a little of the action revolves around their music and the club where they play. I am not familiar with the music titles or the work of the artists referred to in the novel but the author is clearly a Jazz aficionado.
The pace is fast moving with a number of twists and turns which is a prerequisite of the genre. I found it to be a thoroughly enjoyable read.
Published DSM Publications as
an ebook, paperback and audiobook
June 29, 2020
This thriller took me a while to get use to the author’s writing style but once I did I found the story fascinating. Nomita Khanna gets into the mind of a psychopath and narrates in the first person. Thus much of the expressions used are disjointed and sometimes weird. It is a valiant attempt to seek out what motivates a disturbed individual and I feel the writer succeeds in that attempt. Like me readers might not at first fully understand what is going on here but if they stick with it they are in for a fascinating treat.
Independently published and available as an ebook and paperback
June 10, 2020
I am fortunate in that, as well as a writer, I am an independent publisher which means I do not have to set targets for my writing. I write when and where I want to. I had had enough having to keep to targets set by my bosses in my day job in the years before I retired. This means that I can go for days without writing a single word, which is often the case as I am lazy. But it also means that I have time to enjoy it.
I like to tell stories and periodically find myself compelled to write them down. Sometimes I write several hundred words a day and on the odd occasion this rises to over a thousand. But more often than not I struggle for words, so my output can be just a few sentences. My first drafts contain all sorts of mistakes of continuity, spelling and grammar. The plot can invariably not make much sense. This is where the editing comes in where content gets changed, thrown out or even added.
I am slightly dyslexic and, fortunately, there are aids on line and in the writing community to help me. Before the age of computers and word processors, I began writing my stories by hand, but this was a slow process as it made for much crossing out and rewriting. I graduated to a portable typewriter and, as I was very much a novice typist, the process became even slower. But then came PCs, the internet, online spellcheckers and grammar aids and I was away on my journey. This technology, though brilliant, is not nearly enough, but the help I receive from the trusted readers I first show my work to is invaluable.
June 4, 2020
Here are some heart warming stories which are very readable. They are just right for downloading to a Kindle or smart phone to grab a quick read during a spare moment. The author has a knack for holding one’s attention to the end of each short narrative which leaves the reader with the feeling of a time well spent. I recommend this work to anyone who enjoys short fiction.
Available from Amazon Media
as an ebook and paperback
April 9, 2020
It was a different world when we were born and bigotry was part of the culture. Homosexuality was illegal and women were supposed to give up working once they started a family. These attitudes though unpalatable today did not pose the same threats that we face now.
The two generations which preceded us boomers went through the war years and were largely unappreciated by us at the time. We were spoilt and did not care to consider why they thought the way they did. The flower power music and sexual freedoms of our youth were often self indulgent and then gave way to greed for power and possessions. Thus we voted for governments (both Labour, Coalition and Conservative) who failed to plan properly for future generations, similar to the way that the post war administration set up the NHS.
The modern world has been unprepared for the current pandemic. Governments had been warned. As a microbiologist, who spent forty years in government service, I attended national and international meetings where the general consensus was that a pandemic similar to the flu outbreak of 1918 was on its way. These views were largely ignored and other warnings expressed about climate change simply pandered to.
Britain has lost its soul to global corporations. Those that follow us are the smart phone and play station generation that are already being recruited to pilot drones to drop bombs on poor people thousands of miles from where they are based. But on the bright side the Johnson Government is having to introduce measures far more socialist than anything proposed by Jeremy Corbyn. When the current pandemic passes our world will never be the same again.
March 13, 2020
The hard hitting dialogue may not be to everyone’s taste and it took me a while to get use to it. I have no idea how authentic the language used is typical of the underclass in Northern Island, but because of my sketchy knowledge of the recent history of the province during the ‘Troubles’, I found it believable. The plot had a number of exciting twists and turns which held my interest.
The book is titled as a collection of novellas. I searched Amazon and discovered that each had been published separately; but judging by the way the stories are intertwined, this collection can be regarded as a short novel in its own right. Just over half way through the book the author introduces a short story read to a small audience by a friend of the protagonist. The story does not fit into the rest of the narrative and I presume is included to show that the author can write in a more genteel style. The font changes to italics for this narrative and then slips back to the original font for the main plot.
The inclusion of the short story may be a marketing ploy as is the inclusion of a link to a music download described as a soundtrack. It is not really, but it is a sample of the author’s own music. I downloaded my copy and my initial listening found it interesting but not remarkable. However, I do think it is the kind of music I might come to like on repeated playings so I will stick with it.
Available as a papeback and ebook
February 25, 2020
Short stories are difficult to write. There must be very few characters, they should be believable and every word should count. Brian Bold has mastered the art of Flash Fiction and there are some gems here, which live up to the collection’s title. This is ideal for anyone wishing to dip in and out of for a quick read.
Published by Lulu.com
in kindle and ebook formats
January 23, 2020
A novel’s backstory can slow down the pace of the narrative. When I read a novel I like to get straight to the heart of the story so it immediately grasps my attention. Often a backstory is not required. It is useful as it helps authors understand what motivates the characters they create. But it may not be needed in the text for readers to understand the plot. Once a backstory has been written it is often deleted during the editing process but if it is needed to flesh out the characters for the reader then the author must decide at what point it should be inserted to have the best effect.
The backstory in my novel, “Magic Bullets”, kicks in at chapter five when the protagonist hears that the first serious love of his life had died and I decided to show what happened during their relationship rather than simply tell another story. I began the novel with a terrorist attack. The episode itself does not occur until three quarters of the way through the book as I wanted to grasp reader’s attention from the start.
I differentiated these out of sequence events from the linear narrative by changing the font to italics. Judging by the reviews most readers liked this approach. There were a few who did not care fore the book but I do not think that their opinions had much to do with the structure. They simply did not like the story. Still you cannot please every one.
Available through http://peatmore.com/magicbullets.htm