This is a novella written in the first person. The story reads like an official report. But this is okay as the protagonist, Jack Toback, is a government servant brought up through the ranks of a USA prison service. He makes some small attempts at humour, which though few, fit into his personality.
He is put in charge of a revolutionary correctional facility run by robots and there is a great deal of description about their development and how they work. Although the narrative is set in the future it is very relevant to the current time as the use of electronic technology and robots are becoming more integrated into our society. The story left a number of issues unresolved. This is not a unique or bad idea as it keeps the reader thinking about the various forces influencing the outcome of the automated prison experiment.
There is certainly potential here to expand the plot further and develop it into a novel or as a series of shorter stories. The detailed style of writing may not be to everyone’s taste but it locked me in to turning the pages of my Kindle right to the end. I can recommend it to any lover of dystopian fiction.
Caged is available on Amazon’s Kindle Store for $1.40 / £0.99